I have never heard of the word doula. This thesis statement has a good start, but nothing makes me want to read the rest of the paper. Maybe add a little to it. My thesis statement is not an attention grabber, I had to work with it to try to make it more appealing. SO HARD! haha.
I have never heard of the word doula. This thesis statement has a good start, but nothing makes me want to read the rest of the paper. Maybe add a little to it. My thesis statement is not an attention grabber, I had to work with it to try to make it more appealing. SO HARD! haha.
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